I found it hard to
do my word and make them in to a good piece of writing.
Next time I need to make
it good and I might need to focus more.
In the last few weeks we have been
learning about a piece of persuasive writing and this was what I did and I love how it
turned out.This was mine and mine was really cool and fun to do. When we first
done this we had to first do our draft and then we had to do our publishing on a
google slide.Me and my buddy had to make this one called "should animals be used
for scientific research?" and me and my buddy totally disagreed to this it was the
worst thing to see dont be rude and never test on animals i hope you like my
piece of writing!
This was really fun to make!
Kia ora Manaia,
ReplyDeleteI liked how your background showed a healthy environment and that it was things that could be found in New Zealand. When you said that half our ocean is full of rubbish I realized that there is more than I thought in our sea. Next time it would help me know more if you made your font a little bit easier for me to read.
Yours in friendly regards Isobel.