Thursday, August 6, 2020

The great FUN RUN!

we where learning about we had to write either the great fun run or the wild lab and i picked fun run because that was the most funest fun run ever and lots of people wrote about the fun run.

i found it easy to re-craft and write all of the words in the google doc 


i found it hard to write some words and make it really make the title really big


Next time i need to make my words a bit smaller and not make to much stuff next time


2 comments:

  1. Kia Ora Manaia, I really like your blog post its very interesting,I like the way how you have put detailed stems into to your blog post. I also like how you have a very interesting writing about the fun run its so cool. maybe next time you should do your blog posts a bit more quality.
    thank you By Summer

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  2. Kia ora Manaia,
    it was cool that you made it quite clear that you loved the fun run a lot! I like how you put your in your thoughts on the fun run and just from reading this post I can tell that you would like to do it again. Next time I think you should do a bit more editing.
    Yours sincerely Isobel.

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